tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9177935673290025151.post670172818757785551..comments2024-03-22T09:19:20.167+00:00Comments on Poems & Perceptions: DADDY'S GIRLYgrainehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00300519608303898969noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9177935673290025151.post-41573875611488488472013-02-04T11:25:33.871+00:002013-02-04T11:25:33.871+00:00Many thanks Cuban!
Greetings from Sunny (for the ...Many thanks Cuban!<br /><br />Greetings from Sunny (for the moment, anyway!) Hampshire :)Ygrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00300519608303898969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9177935673290025151.post-67850903309332033322013-02-04T11:24:11.543+00:002013-02-04T11:24:11.543+00:00No, me neither! Brings nothing but grief :/
No, me neither! Brings nothing but grief :/<br />Ygrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00300519608303898969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9177935673290025151.post-39357853377070811752013-02-03T19:48:45.623+00:002013-02-03T19:48:45.623+00:00Brilliant! I love the way you prepare the reader f...Brilliant! I love the way you prepare the reader for the dénouement. A really good poem. Many thanks.<br /><br />Greetings from London.A Cuban In Londonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16423293358605007539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9177935673290025151.post-40101660068047063212013-02-03T14:09:21.086+00:002013-02-03T14:09:21.086+00:00I don't understand conditional love.I don't understand conditional love.<br /><br /><br />The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9177935673290025151.post-33877250395358240802013-02-02T15:55:15.668+00:002013-02-02T15:55:15.668+00:00Thank you Dave.
Thank goodness I wasn't born m...Thank you Dave.<br />Thank goodness I wasn't born male.<br />Would hate to end up like 'Daddy'...such humiliation would probably kill me!! Hehe:DYgrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00300519608303898969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9177935673290025151.post-61787511604734477132013-02-02T15:52:01.876+00:002013-02-02T15:52:01.876+00:00Thank you so much. I really appreciate your visit ...Thank you so much. I really appreciate your visit and your comments.<br />Perhaps if Daddy had allowed her to just be herself... and daughter had expressed her true feelings... then maybe it would have made for a more balanced relationship...but then I'm no expert!! Hehe:D<br />Ygrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00300519608303898969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9177935673290025151.post-84844172394304531212013-02-02T15:42:31.689+00:002013-02-02T15:42:31.689+00:00To be honest, Nyssa, I'm not altogether sure w...To be honest, Nyssa, I'm not altogether sure where this one came from!<br />It began with the idea of a devoted father, then just seemed to write itself.<br />I agree with you about the ego. Nothing good ever comes from building one's self-esteem on so fragile a thing, does it?!<br />Many thanks for your kind words of encouragement. xxxYgrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00300519608303898969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9177935673290025151.post-42747074153611335082013-02-02T15:35:08.211+00:002013-02-02T15:35:08.211+00:00Hi Rose,
Thought this one was going to go horribly...Hi Rose,<br />Thought this one was going to go horribly wrong, as I developed writer's block in the middle of it,<br />but you have made my day!<br />Thank you so much xxYgrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00300519608303898969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9177935673290025151.post-80732008961776552702013-02-02T15:31:56.188+00:002013-02-02T15:31:56.188+00:00Many thanks Keith.
I guess there would be a downsi...Many thanks Keith.<br />I guess there would be a downside to having such a 'doting daddy' Hehe :D<br />I'm so glad my relationship with my father was much simpler!!Ygrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00300519608303898969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9177935673290025151.post-85443275727242519482013-02-02T11:50:34.172+00:002013-02-02T11:50:34.172+00:00I guess there's consolation in being the marty...I guess there's consolation in being the martyr when the dream has gone for ever. Great tale, well told.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9177935673290025151.post-15266948185342784602013-02-02T01:11:22.372+00:002013-02-02T01:11:22.372+00:00Amazingly written! I felt the proudness daddy had ...Amazingly written! I felt the proudness daddy had and how it became scarred with shame and humiliation. I also felt the daughter longing to find her self. A very deep and powerful description. <br />Sassy https://www.blogger.com/profile/12473560581723247919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9177935673290025151.post-10641904913119499992013-02-02T00:21:37.517+00:002013-02-02T00:21:37.517+00:00it seems the father brought his own pain about. oh...it seems the father brought his own pain about. oh, the ego and how much it destroys. i loved this poem. so psychologically deep again. so much between the lines in these lives you give birth to with your talent. xoxonyssahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12592583659013282708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9177935673290025151.post-84370911667757298592013-02-01T22:26:20.192+00:002013-02-01T22:26:20.192+00:00Poor Daddy such a martyr! I love this Ygraine you ...Poor Daddy such a martyr! I love this Ygraine you have a talent for painting with words. I saw the whole drama play out delightfully while I savoured each word. Fabulous write once again! Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05059957468044601830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9177935673290025151.post-7695825452844911242013-02-01T20:20:45.015+00:002013-02-01T20:20:45.015+00:00Ygraine this was very powerful. A very evocative p...Ygraine this was very powerful. A very evocative portrayal of a complicated father-daughter relationship. Optimistic Existentialisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11507986337866049924noreply@blogger.com