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Friday, 27 July 2012

DESIRE

I'm taking control of your senses, lover;
igniting your carnal fire.
Love or lust? Does it really matter,
as long as the species survives?

I've made you see a beautiful face
with a body that's Heaven on Earth,
where before you'd have only seen a girl:
nothing special, not remotely your type.

So here you are in the throes of passion,
as the fountain hits the orb
prepared by Nature for mid-month fusion.
And she cries out in my name, 'Oh God...'

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    1. I am amazed at your ability to make one word mean so much!
      Thank you, thank you :)

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  2. Oh, I do like this! It just about guarantees that the species will survive!

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    1. I was just wondering what it is that we all see in each other, and why.
      I guess it's all down to that one little word genetically programmed into us.
      Long may it survive! Hehehe :D

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    1. Many thanks for reading this IcyHighs.
      Really appreciate it :)

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  4. oooOOo...O. so inlove with this poem.

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    1. Hi Paige + Shauna,
      Thanks so much for visiting.
      Really happy you liked it :)

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  5. Wowww! Ygraine, you have played wonderfully with desire.
    Love is blind so, together with passion, it can turn a monster into an angel.
    The man is watching a different girl and the girl herself has developed another personality, very, very good! Excellent transformation.
    Oh, God!
    A hug.
    :)

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    1. Thank you so much, Dulcina.
      You're absolutely spot-on, love IS blind, isn't it?
      Just as well it is, or I would have been a long time on the shelf by now! Hehehe :D

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  6. Great stuff Ygraine love the ending :) Simply divine :D

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    1. Thank you so much, dear friend.
      So glad you liked it. It grew from of one of my 'Why' questions!!

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  7. Molto bella!! felice fine settimana a te...ciao

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  8. Thank you!
    Hope you're having a great weekend too :)

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