Such perfection is bizarre
when there is no life within
those artificial boundaries
of plate glass and pretty lace.
Endless Moons cannot age her,
nor bless her with fertility.
And yet she has an aura -
a spell within her smile
that snares the eye and mind:
you have to pause and look...
and how easily you're swayed
by this rigor mortis babe
into picturing yourself
standing there in her place,
transformed by over-priced attire
into a Goddess, flawless as she.
Harsh midday Sun
highlights a sculptural face
that betrays not the slightest hint
of wrinkle nor expression line.
Oh to step beyond the glass
into this glamorous world
of the make-believe beauty
dressed for a summer ball...
who can never play with a mobile phone;
enjoy an Indian takeaway;
go swimming on a Saturday;
or know how it feels to love.
An unearthly stillness envelopes you then,
as you notice her soulless eyes
and the dust that's begun to gather
on immobile corpse-like limbs.
Now wearing shimmering satin
has suddenly lost it's appeal,
for it brings to mind a burial shroud,
colourless, like a ghost.
Just sufficient battery to post this...will get back to you all on Monday!
Have a great weekend. :)
when there is no life within
those artificial boundaries
of plate glass and pretty lace.
Endless Moons cannot age her,
nor bless her with fertility.
And yet she has an aura -
a spell within her smile
that snares the eye and mind:
you have to pause and look...
and how easily you're swayed
by this rigor mortis babe
into picturing yourself
standing there in her place,
transformed by over-priced attire
into a Goddess, flawless as she.
Harsh midday Sun
highlights a sculptural face
that betrays not the slightest hint
of wrinkle nor expression line.
Oh to step beyond the glass
into this glamorous world
of the make-believe beauty
dressed for a summer ball...
who can never play with a mobile phone;
enjoy an Indian takeaway;
go swimming on a Saturday;
or know how it feels to love.
An unearthly stillness envelopes you then,
as you notice her soulless eyes
and the dust that's begun to gather
on immobile corpse-like limbs.
Now wearing shimmering satin
has suddenly lost it's appeal,
for it brings to mind a burial shroud,
colourless, like a ghost.
Just sufficient battery to post this...will get back to you all on Monday!
Have a great weekend. :)
Another amazing poem by you, Ygraine :) have a great weekend!!
ReplyDeleteYou are so kind, Keith...thank you so much!
DeleteHope you are having a fabulous week...:)
Maybe not much life to your battery 'out there in the wilderness" but there sure is a lot of life to your poetry ...
ReplyDeleteYou got amazing writing skills ... wow!
Enjoy the weekend and have a great time .
Hugs xxx
Be safe ...
Oh thank you, Sweetie!
DeleteIt did feel so strange...having no electricity - you should have seen me trying to shower by candle light, under canvas...haha...first I lost the shower gel...then tripped over the towel!! And it was so COLD...but, hey, was a fantastic experience...
Big Hugs xxx
Oh, what an experience but a good one in spite of tripping over your towel ... LOL
DeleteSo glad it was a fantastic time .... xxx
Excellent poem, Ygraine. Poor mannequin sells the dress but can never feel fabulous in it.
ReplyDeleteHa...yes, and we mere mortals can wear the dress...but without the physical perfection to really carry it off...seems somehow unfair!! *chuckles*
DeleteMany thanks, Geo. Really appreciate that...:)
it becomes easy to create perfection...when there is no life in it....
ReplyDeleteand we play out our own wounded image of ourselves making these representations of what we can never become...then again,
there is a reason there is no life in such perfection...smiles.
Think I get your meaning, Brian...yes, if there WERE life in such perfection it could be disastrous...there would be nothing left to strive for, would there?
DeleteHa...that is the fun of dressing up...the creation of an another "us" that is an artistic version of who we wish we were! ;)
Many thanks :)
You are so amazing dear Ygraine and how kind to get in touch with us so we know you're ok, you're a darling and don't worry that \i don't have a blog anymore I will always visit all my dearest friends, have a ball!!!!xoxoxo
ReplyDeleteThat was my biggest fear, Sweetie...that if you closed your blog, we'd lose touch.
DeleteOf course I'll desperately miss that wonderful blog...but staying in touch with you is so much more important!
Please take care...and have a fabulous week.:)
Big Hugs xxx
Wonderful poem. Used to draw from mannequin. They hold a pose well. Used to imagines them coming to life, and some of the thoughts included in your words..
ReplyDeleteHa...thanks Anthony.
DeleteYour words certainly made me think...when I was a child, I used to wish I could have one of those shop mannequins in my bedroom. I would dress it in my clothes and imagine I could be that flawless when I wore them! *smiles*
Yes, I can imagine they would make good models...although, of course, they could never have the same life in them as a human ones...nor any of those little distinguishing blemishes that mark us out as individuals...not that I could tell the difference in your sketches though. They are all so vivid and alive! :)
This poem is amazing! I love the way you described everything! Big Hugs xoxox
ReplyDeleteOh thank you Stacy!
DeleteI am so happy you liked the poem.
Hope your leg is much better now...I have been thinking of you.
Big hugs xxx
Leg is doing much better ;o) Still hurts a little, but I can't complain ;o)
Delete"Esa perfeccion es extraña"
ReplyDeleteGran poema.
Nice poem.
Thank you so much, Boris.
DeleteYour encouragement is very much appreciated...:)
Have a great week :)
wonderful!
ReplyDeleteMany thanks, Jane.
DeleteReally good to hear from you! :)