The rich glow of sunset rides the restless waves.
He glides high on a crest, sure of his balance
and then soars like a gull. And landing is just as graceful.
He slides into the beach. Soaking, dripping wet.
He tells me it's California next year, as the *Strand
no longer challenges. But he's said it many times before,
always at summer's end when the lengthening nights
begin to deflate him. Touching the deep battle scar
on his thigh: "The Strand can be lethal!"
When he kisses me it's like drowning at sea.
But I find I'm developing gills.
It's daunting though, such fanatical enthusiasm,
and my slightest hesitation infuriates him.
Huge decision. He's asking me to sacrifice so much.
I am no groupie...but those gorgeous golden curls!
I plug in the Beach Boys. He drives the Volkswagen
into the night. The entire Universe is us,
sunshine and surf - and a peculiar kind of togetherness
that depends on lots of time apart and no firm commitments.
Approaching headlights pick out the blonde in his curls
and a picture-perfect bone structure.
Here, is my life.
*Trebarwith Strand, Cornwall, England.
He glides high on a crest, sure of his balance
and then soars like a gull. And landing is just as graceful.
He slides into the beach. Soaking, dripping wet.
He tells me it's California next year, as the *Strand
no longer challenges. But he's said it many times before,
always at summer's end when the lengthening nights
begin to deflate him. Touching the deep battle scar
on his thigh: "The Strand can be lethal!"
When he kisses me it's like drowning at sea.
But I find I'm developing gills.
It's daunting though, such fanatical enthusiasm,
and my slightest hesitation infuriates him.
Huge decision. He's asking me to sacrifice so much.
I am no groupie...but those gorgeous golden curls!
I plug in the Beach Boys. He drives the Volkswagen
into the night. The entire Universe is us,
sunshine and surf - and a peculiar kind of togetherness
that depends on lots of time apart and no firm commitments.
Approaching headlights pick out the blonde in his curls
and a picture-perfect bone structure.
Here, is my life.
*Trebarwith Strand, Cornwall, England.
How beautifully romantic, my dear friend.
ReplyDeleteTo feel this charge of electricity again is now beyond my capabilities. A gentle hug and just a whisper of a kiss fit me now like my comfortable and well worn jeans.
Big Hugs and Lots of Love My Talented Friend~
Haha...you and I both, dearest Jan!😉
DeleteJust as well we still retain the capacity to imagine, eh?
Trouble is, mine sometimes runs away with me!! Lol
Thank you my dear friend...so much!😊😊
Much love and hugs xoxoxo
Enjoyed this so much. The unplanned plans of youth so completely based on dreams and going on forever..
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely...ah, if only we could revisit those carefree times, even for just an instant...seems to me maturity brings just a touch too much caution!😉
DeleteThank you so much!😊😊
The story was as good as the verse.
ReplyDeleteArlee Bird
Tossing It Out
Oh thank you, Arlee...so much!😊😊
DeleteSuch an evocative piece. I well remember that togetherness which needs time apart and no long term commitments...
ReplyDelete*smiles* at that time all I longed for was seamless togetherness...now, I often long for solace!😉
DeleteThank you so much!😊😊
A hug xoxoxo
Really enjoyed this Ygraine, thank you.
ReplyDeleteAll the best Jan
Oh thank you, Jan...so much!😊😊
DeleteA hug xoxoxo
Nice one Ygraine.
ReplyDeleteI could totally see the characters
doing those things as I read them.
And wow! The Beach Boys songs,
I love them even though they are
ahead of my time.
Ann
https://roomsofinspiration.blogspot.com/
Oh thank you so much, Ann...I so appreciate your kind words!😊😊
DeleteYes, me too...I adore the sound of the Beach Boys!!
I love this one Ygraine! So beautifully written! I enjoyed it so much! Thank you my friend! Big Hugs!
ReplyDeleteOh Sweetie...my heartfelt thanks!!😊😊
DeleteSo happy you enjoyed...
All my love and hugs xoxoxo
Woo.. hoo...and alrighta!!! I just love this poem.The vibe is spot on. Surf city here we come.
ReplyDeleteWell done my friend, one of your best.😊
Oh to be young and carefree again, eh?😉
DeleteI wish! Lol
Oh wow...thank you so much...you have made my day. Truly!😊😊
Lots of love and hugs xoxoxo
well written poem. love it.
ReplyDeleteOh thank you, Tanza...I so appreciate that!
ReplyDeleteSo happy you enjoyed...:))
SUBLIME POETRY!!!
ReplyDeletedear Ygraine you are remarkable poet and i am lucky to find you !
you made me float with you within horizons of this not much big universe:)