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Friday, 17 May 2013

THE TIME LORD

River's song...


Moving closer
To where the digital dots join up,
Bringing fifth dimension to thought -
Touch to sight, oh yes, finally
Something tangible
Stepping out of fantasy
Into the living flesh:
This Alien
In the shape of man...

Oh God, he's dressing me in rainbows,
In his multi-dimensional box
That spans eternity.
I can have it all, he promises
With those timeless eyes,
And it's coming ever closer...

I'm sucked into the plasma.
Oh, that first kiss...the touch of his lips
Moving south, gradually conquering
Uncharted Downs, the heath in flames.
Defences razed in wild submission,
As his desire caresses
The womanhood to life...

His pounding second heart
Slips between my breasts -
The ultimate gift, oh yes,
And his spark takes life
Beyond my extra rib, yes, oh yes,
And we come together,
The Doctor and I,
At last
In time.

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    1. Thank you, CD.
      That is so appreciated!:)

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  2. Ygraine! I knew within the first stanza it was he of whom you spoke! ;)
    I cannot tell you how much I enjoy your writing! Your pages are such varied adventures and carry me to places I would not necessarily travel on my own.
    xx

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    1. Wow...you have paid me such a compliment!
      Thank you so much xxx

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  3. Enjoyed… the tempo builds with each line pulling me in.

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    1. Thank you, Anthony.
      That is so good to hear.:)

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  4. Brilliant writing. I take it that this is about Dr Who. I sometimes catch the odd ep with my children if I'm doing stuff int he lounge and I can't take my eyes off the telly. Many thanks.

    Greetings from London.

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    1. You guessed right! Haha.
      So sad the series has ended now...can't wait for the next!

      Greetings from a (rare) sunny Hampshire!!

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    1. Many thanks, Madison.
      Really appreciate that.:)

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  6. Pretty much the perfect poem, I would say, the way it's crafted and especially the way it moves from fantasy to something I can recognise as reality - and that despite his second heart and your extra rib. It's a tour de force.

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    1. Oh Dave, that is so encouraging.
      Thank you so much!
      As you can see, I am a huge fan of the series...I wonder how John Hurt will shape up?!:)

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  7. You are so clever with words Ygraine. Another brilliant creation, wow:)

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    1. Rose, you are so kind!
      Thank you very much.:)

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