The Moon is growing full again.
See her swollen belly,
heavy with the foetus within?
I remember when she was stick-thin,
invisible almost,
a virginal crescent
of glowing gold
that inflamed the Sun God,
then stole his fire.
Observing the eclipse in awe,
a God and Goddess' coupling
that touches us all:
In the blackout
I feel your hands
arousing in me a hunger.
On this rain-drenched beach
I take it all:
your pulsing energy
and reaching deeper,
discover an awakening Soul
as desperate as mine for immortality...
But Her time has passed now.
She is growing slim again.
Oh such bitter disappointment -
I am not the chosen one
to bear a miniature Sun.
There is only blood...
its all part of the cycles...she is fickle...preferring not to let any of us own her...she gives that love and pulls the tides of each as indiscriminate...she is beautiful though....enjoy her while she faces you and know that as she turns away, she will be back soon...
ReplyDeleteMoon cycles have always fascinated me...I find myself most motivated during the waxing Moon, less so in the waning phase.
DeleteBut the full Moon is the most difficult...I am restless, often irritable, yet am at my most creative.
As for an eclipse...well they bring tremendous headaches!! LOL
Many thanks, Brian :)
I love the way this was written around the different phases of the moon....how in each month it goes from full, to thin, back to full again...
ReplyDeleteEver since I was really small, I have regarded the full Moon as the pregnant womb of the Goddess...I can clearly see the foetus! *smiles*...perhaps I am mad, or could you see those craters the same way too?
DeleteYes, I love to observe the phases...to make up stories for each one.
Think I'll definitely be deemed insane one day!!! Haha :D
Many thanks, Keith :)
Elegantly written, dear Ygraine...so beautiful. I also love seeing the moon in all of her phases and to know that she watches over the earth while it sleeps under her caring caress...being the Goddess that she is~
ReplyDeleteHugs
xoxoxo
Do you know, Jan, that is exactly how I feel?
DeleteWhen I gaze at the full Moon, I see not a simple Moon, but a Goddess.
She definitely rules my emotions, as effortlessly as She controls the tides.
Yes, a powerful presence indeed! :)
Many thanks, dear Friend xxx
YGRAINE, MY FRIEND, your writing is absolutely beyond the realm of normal people, your writing is so sensational it leaves me thirsty, and still my brain reacts and wonders how in the world did you write this pure art it's lovely xoxoxo
ReplyDeleteOh WOW...you are so kind, Lorraine.
DeleteI believed this a very simple poem, a personal view of the Moon. I certainly never expected such praise.
So thank you my dear friend...from my heart...:)
Big Hugs xxx
I am such a moon lover and I simply loved this poem.
ReplyDeleteExceptional poem
Have a wonderful weekend Ygraine
Hugs
xoxo
Oh thank you so much, Margie!
DeleteIt makes me so happy to know how much you enjoyed reading this.
Do hope you are having a great weekend too.
Big Hugs xxx
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DeleteI sure like how you write. Following.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Geo...so good to hear from you.
DeleteI will visit your blog shortly. :)
Hope you are having a great weekend.
Loved the close on this Yg. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteMany thanks, TUG.
DeleteDo hope all is OK with you xxx
Un poema elegante, la luna te ha inspirado muy bien, saludos.
ReplyDeleteOh thank you, Boris...I really do find the Moon such an inspiration! :)
DeleteHave a great weekend...
This is wonderful. I love the symbolism and the story folded just behind the obvious.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Anthony.
DeleteI would love to think that I will one day learn to sketch as well in words as you do with your pens and paints...so for now, I will continue to just let the inspiration flow...;)
This is one of my favourites you have written! Really touched my heat! I love mother moon ;o) Big Hugs ;o)
ReplyDeleteOh I'm so glad you feel as I do...it gives me a wonderful sense of connection!
DeleteThank you so much, dear friend:)
Big Hugs xxx
Heat, is suppose to be heart ;o) LOL!
ReplyDeleteHaha...I'm always doing that too! LOL
DeleteYgraine...this poetry is so alive!! I can still feel it echoing with imagery in my mind,,,..thanks for shining your deeply magical soul..this has been a spellbinding experience...just beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThis may be one of my new favorites!!( and there are SO many)
I am truly humbled by your more than generous comment, Victoria.
DeleteThese kind words mean so much.
Thank you...thank you from my heart. :)
Big Hugs xxx
Ygraine this is misterous and fascinating !
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written, a surprisingly wonderful eclipse!
ReplyDeleteA pregnant moon, bearing the sun's son, a miniature sun, I love this idea! :)
The Sun as symbol of love, caressing and warming her...
And the terrible end, the moon's aborting... bleeding.
A hug.