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Friday 29 December 2017

BLACKBIRD IN THE FOG

                                 
Tall trees reach up into greyness.
Humans and dogs
overlook me. I am practically invisible.

Passing cars leave a trail of white.
Red bus
the only coloured thing,

and even that appears faded
as the embers of a dying fire
almost obscured by ash.

Frost-encrusted primulas in a window box.
My bones, too, are stiffened with coldness
in a garden no longer welcoming.

Hunger. The seed and fat balls,
rendered inedible by frozen fog, are lost -
like me - in the depths of winter's abyss.

20 comments:

  1. Wonderfully moody, sad, and maybe a little bored. Love this..
    Sitting Looking out the window on a cold winter day in the studio. perfect words..

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    1. Aww...thank you so much, Anthony...I truly appreciate that! :))
      Just been looking out of my window too...very grey and uninviting...

      Happy New Year!

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  2. Hi Ygraine, what lovely poems always you make, send you hugs and love! xoxox

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    1. Oh thank you so much, dearest Gloria...I appreciate that so much!😊😊

      Wishing you a very Happy New Year.

      Much Love and Hugs xoxo

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  3. I enjoyed your poem ...
    I can picture the red bus, the primulas and the fat balls so well ...

    My good wishes for the coming New Year.

    All the best Jan

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    1. Thank you so much, Jan...so happy you enjoyed this!

      Happy New Year! 😊😊

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    1. Oh Lon...I am so sorry, I truly had no idea that you had suffered like that. My heart really goes out to you, my Friend.

      Am sending a big hug...and wishing you a very Happy New Year...

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    1. Thank you so much...and it is really good to hear from you! ☺☺

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  6. Winter's abyss how deeply wonderful and poignant, ah the way you write ygraine is a wonder. Happy New Year!

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    1. Oh Sweetie...I can't even begin to tell you how good it is to hear from you again!
      And I was so happy to see you had begun blogging again...but then dismayed to see you thought you weren't good enough. Oh you definitely are!!
      Please keep blogging?
      I did try to leave a comment, but couldn't for some reason!
      Wishing you a very Happy New Year...
      Lots of love and hugs xoxo

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  7. Beautiful my friend! You have such a way with words!!
    I'm watching the full moon tonight!
    Happy New Year!! Here's to a great 2018!!
    Big Hugs, Much Happiness and lots of love!!

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    1. Oh Sweetie...how can I ever thank you enough?!
      Your kind words of encouragement truly make my day!!

      I was watching the full moon last night too...for once we had a clear sky - although it was very windy!

      Happy New Year and lots of love xoxo

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  8. beautiful painting of words ,displaying the glooms and wilderness of season which has soothing beauty and calm whispers of lonely bird!

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    1. Oh thank you so much, you are so kind, dearest Baili!😊😊

      Wishing you a very Happy New Year!!

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  9. Gorgeous, this is absolutely gorgeous. Thanks.

    Happy New Year! :-)

    Greetings from London.

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    1. Oh wow...thank you so much, CiL...that truly means so much to me!😊😊

      Greetings from Hampshire!

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  10. This is beautiful Ygraine. Makes me cold reading it. Love your descriptive haunting verses.

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    1. Oh thank you so much, Sandy...so happy you enjoyed this! 😀😀

      Have a great weekend xoxo

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