Life is dull and empty now
and pointless are future years,
for I'm drowning in the self-made rapids
of bitter flowing tears.
It seems so long since you left, my love,
yet it's been no more than a week.
I'm all cried out, my heart is crippled
without the love I seek.
You were my Sun, my Moon, my Stars.
My Air, Fire and Stone -
but most of all, the shining Grail
I sought was you alone.
Yet I failed to see it at the time,
so was easily led astray
by a silver painted china cup
with whom I played away.
So please believe me when I say
I'm consumed by bitter regret
for being driven by hollow lust.
It's you I cannot forget.
I'm begging you, forgive me do -
I know it's a huge request,
but if I could win your heart again
I'd fulfill the most treacherous quest.
Oh if this agony were yours
of such longing day-by-day
just to feel my touch again,
you'd never stay away. ;))
and pointless are future years,
for I'm drowning in the self-made rapids
of bitter flowing tears.
It seems so long since you left, my love,
yet it's been no more than a week.
I'm all cried out, my heart is crippled
without the love I seek.
You were my Sun, my Moon, my Stars.
My Air, Fire and Stone -
but most of all, the shining Grail
I sought was you alone.
Yet I failed to see it at the time,
so was easily led astray
by a silver painted china cup
with whom I played away.
So please believe me when I say
I'm consumed by bitter regret
for being driven by hollow lust.
It's you I cannot forget.
I'm begging you, forgive me do -
I know it's a huge request,
but if I could win your heart again
I'd fulfill the most treacherous quest.
Oh if this agony were yours
of such longing day-by-day
just to feel my touch again,
you'd never stay away. ;))
Oh , my dear friend...how I can feel the regret the desperation, the heartache.
ReplyDeleteShe may have wandered to the proverbial "grass is greener" but I do hope that she can be forgiven and her lover returns~
BIG HUGS and MUCH LOVE
xoxoxo
Yes, I do so hope she will be forgiven! lol
ReplyDeleteSo strange how an invented character can invoke such sympathy...I can't help but feel for her! ;)
Thank you so much, my Dear friend...:))
All my Love & Hugs xoxoxo
Okay, this is really so great. To love and feel such loss, enough to make such an appeal..
ReplyDeleteMany thanks, Anthony...so glad you enjoyed! ☺☺
DeleteThis is poetry of the tallest order. Loved the tone and rhythm.
ReplyDeleteThanks.
Greetings from London.
Oh thank you...I really appreciate that! ☺☺
DeleteSo beautifully written! So much emotion!! Very powerful! Love it Ygraine! Big Hugs!
ReplyDeleteOh thank you, Sweetie...so much!
DeleteDo hope your aching arms are getting better...too much snow shovelling isn't good for your health!! Lol
Lots of love xx
My compliments and appreciation.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Geo...so happy you enjoyed! ☺☺
DeleteLove.
ReplyDeleteMany thanks, Regine...so glad you enjoyed!😊😊
Deletereally evokes a feeling reading it. Well done!
ReplyDeleteSo happy you enjoyed, Sandy...a an thank you so much! 😊😊
DeleteTouched my soul and made my eyes tear!
ReplyDeleteyou are remarkable poet dear Ygraine!!!
Oh thank you so much, my dear friend...and so happy you enjoyed this! 😊😊
DeleteWow, great words. Well-wriiten. I enjoyed this.
ReplyDeleteReally happy you enjoyed...and thank you so much!☺☺
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