A massive tidal wave devastated Portsmouth.
From an attic window the torrent we watched
in sheer terror as it swamped street after street,
destroying all in it's path.
We cringed as the city was plunged into darkness,
bright lights extinguished in their watery grave,
and wondered would ever again we see
the high street, pier, or Spinnaker Tower.
There were no sirens, no emergency services,
no helicopters airborne - the last hope of salvation.
Neither were there screams of drowning victims,
just an eerie silence as Poseidon surfed in.
His trident held aloft in the dark sky in wrath,
He took His revenge in the sea's fury:
sank all the trawlers that had ravaged His kingdom,
then smashed Nelson's Victory to smithereens.
From an attic window the torrent we watched
in sheer terror as it swamped street after street,
destroying all in it's path.
We cringed as the city was plunged into darkness,
bright lights extinguished in their watery grave,
and wondered would ever again we see
the high street, pier, or Spinnaker Tower.
There were no sirens, no emergency services,
no helicopters airborne - the last hope of salvation.
Neither were there screams of drowning victims,
just an eerie silence as Poseidon surfed in.
His trident held aloft in the dark sky in wrath,
He took His revenge in the sea's fury:
sank all the trawlers that had ravaged His kingdom,
then smashed Nelson's Victory to smithereens.
WOW!!! This is fantastic, Ygraine...and very picturesque! You write from deep within and I love it~
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xoxoxo
Thank you so much, dear friend...you are so kind!
DeleteReally glad you liked it.:)
Love and Hugs back...xxx
Enjoyed the devastation, sort of in silence and grace.. Wonderful..
ReplyDeleteMany thanks, Anthony.
DeleteJust an idea that occurred to me while watching a TV documentary about over fishing...the sea's revenge, so to speak! *chuckles* :)
I loved the last stanze. He holding his trident and surveying the destruction aroun dhim. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteGreetings from London.
Thank you, CiL...so much.
DeleteThink he was pleased with the result of his act of retribution! *smiles* :)
Happy Sunday!
An excellent and elegant reminder that there should be more efficient tsunami warning systems on all coasts (including mine, California's), and certainly in south and west England.
ReplyDeleteYes...as I spend so much time in south west Cornwall, I am often conscious of the power of the Atlanic as it smashes against the cliffs, sending whole sections of rock cascading down into the sea.
DeleteI am convinced that, should a tsunami hit the region, the entire peninsula would be lost...a really sobering thought.
Many thanks, Geo :)
Wow Ygraine! Really strong dear and amazing!
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Thank you so much, Gloria...I really appreciate that!
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Wow you make Poseidon adventure movie, one for children compare to the chill here, wow you are such an incredibly talented writer, so write my dear and never stop , you would make so much money you could travel the world, and visit me on my balcony lol no truly Ygraine this is magnificent, I'm in awe wow xxx
ReplyDeleteOh WOW...you are SO kind, Sweetie!
DeleteNot sure I deserve such praise though...and never worried about making money - although, if that meant I could come visit you on your balcony...well, that rather changes my mind! ;)
Love and Hugs xxx
Very powerful! What an image! Great writing my friend!
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Oh Stacy...how can I ever thank you enough...your kind words mean so, so much.
DeleteSo thank you...from the heart!
Love and Hugs xxx
HI Ygraine..I always feel enriched by your writing and my soul feels full and awake after visiting your world and reading your poetic creations! This poem crashed out at me like lion and each image rich, sharp,hard and potent..a real intensity yet also a gentle sorrow inbetween the lines. Very beautiful and powerful and emotionally gripping...I felt INside the experience ...amazing!
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Oh Victoria...always so wonderful to hear from you!
DeleteAnd it means so much to know that you liked this...I feel so encouraged to keep writing when I am fortunate enough to have good friends like you...:)
Thank you...from my heart...
Hugs and Blessings xxx
Gran historia, Poseidon y su poderoso tridente, me encanta la mitologia.
ReplyDeleteMany thanks, Boris...I really, really appreciate that!
DeleteHope you are having a great week :)
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Deletegeez...what a horrific thing it would be to watch...the gods fury at what had been done to their realm....something that i would hope to never witness...watching the tsunami ravage japan every year in earth science is enough for me...
ReplyDeleteHa...never thought of it as a horror story, Brian...just me feeling sorry for all those poor fish! ;)
DeleteI am a prize hypocrite though...fish is one of my favourite meats...:/
Many thanks :)
Powerfully emotive my friend, wow...
ReplyDeleteThank you, Keith.
DeleteI really appreciate that...:)
Oh bravo Ygraine!
ReplyDeleteYou paint your verses with beautiful words, love the powerful last verse :)
Thank you so much, Rose.
DeleteHope it never comes true though...think I've just seriously scared myself! ;)
Buona serata...ciao.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Giancarlo :)
DeleteHave a fabulous Thursday!