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Friday 5 January 2018

HMS VICTORY




So legendary, it tells with pride
of an era of courageous heroics.

But the shadowy forms on lower decks
embedded in rope, beam and sacking,

are the mute story tellers; the true heroes
of that bygone age, who linger still,

bound here by experience: a nation's sacrifices,
clinging to their flagship for all eternity.

Their organs once pierced by oaken splinters
still ache from wounds that cannot heal.

Oh these poor wretches, mere cannon fodder
for the hungry jaws of greed and war.

How easy for us now to stroll on deck,
here in Portsmouth's famed dry dock

and idolize Horatio as if a God,
without thought of his minions who saved the day.

16 comments:

  1. Wonderfully done. Love the message. So often have walked through and looked past the shining spot lights into the shadows and wondered the same.

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    1. Aah, a kindred Soul!;)
      Thank you so much, Anthony...:))

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  2. I agree with Anthony, I love your message and also the skillful weaving of words.

    Hope it's an excellent week for you, dear Ygraine!😊

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    1. Dearest Grealdine...my heart-felt thanks!

      A better week than of late, thank you...finally getting to the bottom of my immune system problems.
      Do hope you are having a great week too! :))

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  3. Those who have witnessed war and those who have stood against it must feel connected to this well-crafted poem. The magnificent tall ship is an excellent focal point for all who reaped the benefit of heroic efforts --those who made sacrifices that were nearly unthinkable. Like many whose experience pitched them permanently into ambivalence, I can fault only the masters of war, not the pawns.

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    1. Ah yes, I totally agree, Geo...those masters of war...I can't bear to imagine the rewards they'll reap in the afterlife...
      All those lives sacrificed...and for what??

      Thank you so much...:))

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  4. A very good poem ... and having walked around Victory your words and message somehow mean more.

    My good wishes

    All the best Jan

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    1. Thank you, Jan...so much!
      It is such an atmospheric ship. When I visited I couldn't help but feel for those who had suffered so much on board...

      Have a Fabulous week! :))

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  5. So beautifully written! The way you put your words together, is truly magical!! Love the message in this one! Big Hugs!

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    1. Oh Sweetie...thank you...so, so, much!:))
      So happy you enjoyed...

      Much Love & Hugs xoxoxo

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  6. Gorgeous! :-)

    Greetings from London.

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    1. Many thanks, CiL!😀😀

      Have a great weekend!

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  7. My dear Ygraine...you weave words that tell a story as skillfully as Native Americans weave their stories into their art, blankets and pottery.
    You are a talented artist my friend 💕

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    1. Dearest Jan...oh thank you...so, so much!
      Wow...such a wonderful compliment!!
      So great to have you back...your new blog is amazing.😊😊

      Have a great weekend.

      Much love and hugs xoxo

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  8. This magnificent ship goes so well with your marvelous expressions dear Ygraine!

    Many who witnessed the bitterness of wars can relate to your poem profoundly

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    1. Oh thank you so much...I really appreciate that! ☺☺

      Have an amazing day, dearest Baili.

      Big Hugs xoxo

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