No night for introversion:
inhibition's desertion,
touching another plane
spotlights aflame.
Instruments clashing,
Rockers smashing
the barriers of time
with off-beat rhyme.
My senses airborne,
I'll fly 'til dawn.
Bathed in dry ice,
a kind of paradise
materializes
that tantalises
dormant recall
of retro thrall.
And your face I see
in front of me
painted bright
in moonless night.
And I'm suddenly high,
perceptions awry.
It's Day of the Dead
inside my head,
and Mexico City
looks really pretty
at midnight with you,
it's lights pink and blue.
As the drumbeat intoxicates
far more than the opiates,
it's your eyes hold the key
to the unlocking of me,
so deep and so dark
in front of the barque
up there on the screen.
You're suspended between
reality and delusion -
oh please not illusion!
I so need you to be
on the podium, you see.
But now the band changes tack
and draws me back
to earth tonight,
where fantasy's flight
leaves such a hollow
that seems to swallow
my thoughtform of you
in pink and blue.
Now silence falls
at the death of applause,
and it's time to depart
with such hope in my heart...
Very best of luck this weekend, Checo!!
( Needless to say...this was written before the 1st race of the season, in Melbourne, was cancelled!) 😉
inhibition's desertion,
touching another plane
spotlights aflame.
Instruments clashing,
Rockers smashing
the barriers of time
with off-beat rhyme.
My senses airborne,
I'll fly 'til dawn.
Bathed in dry ice,
a kind of paradise
materializes
that tantalises
dormant recall
of retro thrall.
And your face I see
in front of me
painted bright
in moonless night.
And I'm suddenly high,
perceptions awry.
It's Day of the Dead
inside my head,
and Mexico City
looks really pretty
at midnight with you,
it's lights pink and blue.
As the drumbeat intoxicates
far more than the opiates,
it's your eyes hold the key
to the unlocking of me,
so deep and so dark
in front of the barque
up there on the screen.
You're suspended between
reality and delusion -
oh please not illusion!
I so need you to be
on the podium, you see.
But now the band changes tack
and draws me back
to earth tonight,
where fantasy's flight
leaves such a hollow
that seems to swallow
my thoughtform of you
in pink and blue.
Now silence falls
at the death of applause,
and it's time to depart
with such hope in my heart...
Very best of luck this weekend, Checo!!
( Needless to say...this was written before the 1st race of the season, in Melbourne, was cancelled!) 😉
Thanks for your sharing 😊
ReplyDeleteThank you 😊😊
DeleteYgraine,
ReplyDeleteThere is fear in the air, on the day of the dead ... The bath without foam, but with the ice that breaks our fearless (dry) souls.
There is no more paradise, only the silence that falls overcoming death and the hopes contained in your heart!
Another beautiful poem!
Many kisses and good weekend!
Ah, those hopes that keep us going!😉
DeleteThank you, so, so much Doug...I really appreciate your friendship and your support.😊😊
Have a super weekend too!
Many Kisses xxx
Wow!!! Your poem is really catching!
ReplyDeleteMusic is so amazing that it can create a magic atmosphere which encompasses people and creates an unforgetable moment!
Thank you so much, Ana...I am so happy you enjoyed!😊😊
DeleteYes, it is amazing how music can create such powerful impressions and atmospheres, isn't it?!
A beautiful tribute to your favorite race car driver Checo!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful in content and so expressive it touches the reader
emotionally,too!
You are such a talented writer and a beautiful friend!
Hugs and Much Love Always ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Dearest Jan, oh thank you so much!
DeleteYou are the kindest and most precious friend...😊😊
Sending you all my love and hugs, always ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
always yours poems are amazing !!! xoxo
ReplyDeleteOh you are so kind, dear Gloria...and I appreciate that so much!
DeleteThank you.😊😊
Sending much love and hugs ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
thanks for posting, Ygraine
ReplyDelete...and thank you for reading, Richard...I so appreciate your visit!😊😊
DeleteJust beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThe beat is as rhythmic as the music/sensations it captures.
Stay safe. And hugs.
Oh thank you, dear Sue...that is so appreciated!😊😊
DeletePlease stay safe too...these are troubling times, aren't they?!😕
Sending you much love and hugs ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Wonderful words.
ReplyDeleteThey did the right thing in cancelling, as with many other events too.
Enjoy your weekend, we are seeing family on Sunday, really looking forward to that :)
All the best Jan
Aww, thank you, Jan...that is so kind!😊😊
DeleteYes, I agree, not a bad thing...disappointing for we fans, but it would be selfish on our part to wish it to go ahead in the current climate, wouldn't it?!
I hope you enjoyed your weekend!
Stay safe!
Hugs xxx
Exceptional. wonderful. So clear, exciting and introspective.. Even had this introvert see the wonder of such events and the few I had to endure☺
ReplyDeleteOh WOW, I really do feel SO honoured...my most heartfelt thanks! Truly!!😊😊
DeleteSo very happy you enjoyed...
Stay safe...
i really enjoyed reading this - the style, the words, etc
ReplyDeleteSo happy you enjoyed, Sandy...and thank you so much!!😊😊
DeleteStay safe, and have a great day! xxx
Ygraine, your poem is truly beautiful!
ReplyDeleteOh thank you, Lon...so, so much!!😊😊
DeleteStay safe, my friend...
In Indonesia, the rock band I like is called Jamrud
ReplyDeleteI haven't heard of Jamrud...I will check them out.
DeleteMany thanks!😊😊
Stay safe...
Oh that is so kind...my most heartfelt thanks!!😊😊
ReplyDeleteOh WOW...I am genuinely speechless...
ReplyDeleteI have never regarded my scribblings as anything more than mediocre at best...and now you do me such an honour as this.😊😊
Oh thank you...much, much, more than mere words can express...
A Hug.
Thank you, Asep!😊😊
ReplyDeletethis is lyric of the song? can i know what a music group sing this song? :D
ReplyDeleteNo, not the lyrics of a song...just a poem inspired by attending a rock concert!😉😉
DeleteRock On - Music Is The Best Medicine - Be Well
ReplyDeleteCheers
Absolutely!😊😊
DeleteThank you so much!
Please stay safe too...
Cheers!
Great writing my friend!
ReplyDeleteYgraine, I hope you are safe and healthy! Sorry I haven't came around in awhile! Going to try to catch up with all my bloggy friends! Big Hugs!
Oh Sweetie...how you have been missed!
DeleteAnd so good to have you back!!!😊😊
Be safe, and have a great day!!
Lots of love and hugs ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
you portrayed beautifully dear Ygraine
ReplyDeleteyou made me feel almost there with you :)
not just concert but everything has been shut down ,never experienced such uncertainty like this before though but i hope that we will survive this eventually as we used to do always and coming out from this will make us better humans and more unite for sure
hope you your precious son and other family is having blessed times meanwhile my friend ,stay well and healthy !
Oh thank you, my wonderful and caring friend...your kind wishes mean so much!😊😊
DeleteYes, such strange and uncertain times...
and here's hoping you and your precious family remain safe and well too.
You are always in my prayers...
Much love and hugs ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤