I studied his image
all evening,
every gesture,
each facial expression.
By bed time I believed
I knew him intimately:
had demystified his idiosyncrasies,
decoded his DNA.
Later, in dreams, I began
probing his psyche
for unconscious desires
akin to my own.
Then time stood still
and neither of us knew
if we were inside
or outside of the dreams - even
if they were dreams at all -
or some fantastical fusion
of Tantric destinies:
a touching of Souls
in rapturous unity
that I couldn't even begin
to find the words to express...
until now.
all evening,
every gesture,
each facial expression.
By bed time I believed
I knew him intimately:
had demystified his idiosyncrasies,
decoded his DNA.
Later, in dreams, I began
probing his psyche
for unconscious desires
akin to my own.
Then time stood still
and neither of us knew
if we were inside
or outside of the dreams - even
if they were dreams at all -
or some fantastical fusion
of Tantric destinies:
a touching of Souls
in rapturous unity
that I couldn't even begin
to find the words to express...
until now.
Some moments are so intense, that they become tangled between reality and fantasy.
ReplyDeleteYes Ana, they really are, aren't they?
DeleteAnd words are so inadequate at describing those moments...
Many thanks.:))
This is freaking amazing. W-O-W. I'm crazy impressed with this!
ReplyDeleteOh wow, Plum...many thanks...so good to know you liked this. Truly!:))
DeleteThere are times when two become one and hearts beat as one...it is their souls that keep them separated just enough so that when parting they can live on.
ReplyDeleteHow beautiful and touching. My dear and lovely, friend...you write from your soul because you feel with your heart~
Much Love & Many Hugs
xoxoxo
Dearest Jan...you are so, so kind...thank you so much.
DeleteI really enjoyed writing this one...it flowed easily - unlike so many of my efforts!;)
Lots and lots of Love & Hugs xoxoxo
Oh heck.
ReplyDeleteA dream in a dream in reality, that is getting a bit sweaty and --
I say ride that waterslide til you land in the pool.
Whew.
Absolutely, "X", I will do that...even if it means drowning in the attempt! *smiles*
DeleteMany thanks, my friend.:))
Know what u mean, I think ... I dream vividly every time I sleep ... about ... ya ... things ... often, when I wake up, I break a sweat, and say to myself: O, no ... "I hope, this was just a dream" ... by now I educated myself enough to stop dreaming in the middle of my dream ... cuz it's better that way ... Love, cat.
ReplyDeleteReally wish I could do that...you know, stop a dream when it becomes uncomfortable.
DeleteTrouble is...it is only the good ones that stop mid-way...the troubling ones just go on and on. So unfair, I say! :/
Many thanks, Cat.
Big Hugs xoxoxo
wow, beautiful!
ReplyDeleteIs a dream reality or is reality just a dream. Our we living out our life in the Universal mind. .....anyway, I love your poem.
It seems we think alike, Sandy...I am so often asking myself those same questions.
DeleteI wonder if we'll ever know the truth?
Someday...I hope...:)
Thank you so much. :))
Another lovely post, Ygraine, thank you! I have vivid dreams every single night and have been for quite a while now. I am not sure if it is a medication I am taking, but I don't mind the dreams, and I do remember them when I awaken. Some are strange, some creepy, some are inspiring and some just don't make any sense at all, but I feel blessed that I am able to remember my dreams because many cannot. In fact, many say they don't dream at all. In my view, they do dream, they just don't remember them (as in waking up at the appropriate stage of sleep).
ReplyDeleteI appear to go through phases of remembering my dreams...sometimes for months...then I don't remember any at all for a while.
DeleteSome, I wish I could forget...then others, I wish I could remember.
Seems I'm just impossible to please! lol
Thank you so much for sharing your experiences with me, Linda. I find them so interesting.
You and I are alike in many ways.:)
xoxoxo
The connection you expressed in your poem was incredible. It didn't sound like a dream, so vivid it was.Thanks.
ReplyDeleteGreetings from London.
I have always been fascinated with vivid dreams like these, CiL...they seem to breach all the boundaries between reality and imagination.
DeletePerhaps, someday, this parapsychologist will get around to devising an experiment that will tell us once and for all what is going on...;)
Many thanks, my friend! :))
Fantastic!!.. The familiar search of between reality and dream until.. wonderfully done, as usual..
ReplyDeleteOh thank you, Anthony...so much!
DeleteI really enjoyed playing around with this one...such experiences as these have always fascinated me...:)
You express your words so beautifully! So much feeling! I have missed you my friend! Trying to come back to blog land! Big Hugs ;o)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Sweetie!
DeleteOh how I've missed you too...and I hope all is going well in your life.
And so sorry I missed your birthday:(...it's just that so much is going on in my life that I keep forgetting things I should remember. I will have to start making lists!
Do hope you had a magically wonderful day!!
Lots of Love & Hugs xoxoxo
You say incomparable things incomparably well.
ReplyDeleteOh wow...thank you, Geo!
DeleteYour kind words truly mean so much...:))
in one
ReplyDeletewe find we are of more
the dream
__Often, I scan too quickly, and I first read... of >Titanic< destinies; as always "Y", your verse is a thought that... speaks with us all. _m
Hello Ygraine...!!wowness....beautiful..blissful...this was such a deeply gorgeous poem....I could feel the lyrical movement and deep emotions and romantic-excitement whirling in this, and love the collision of the dreamworld/realities...exquisite and magical! the feeling of divine oneness...powerful experience! How I love reading yoru poetry and look forward to visiting you mesmerizing realm!
ReplyDeleteWishing you a beautiful day! There is a new moon next week...I will think of you sister-kindred!
Boa tarde, suas palavras tem enorme alcance, suavemente elas entram bem.
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Oh thank you, AG...so much!
DeleteHave a wonderful weekend...:)
Rich in imagery- a wonderful poem of observance and connection!
ReplyDeleteRich in imagery- a wonderful poem of observance and connection!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Lori...you are so kind! :))
DeleteSome things can't be explained.
ReplyDeleteSo true, Lux...really glad they occasionally happen though!
DeleteMany thanks.:))
Hi dear friend excellent Writing. God Bless you
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DeleteWow, a touching of souls, so beautiful Ygrain :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much...dear Rose...your more than kind comments always lift my spirits.
DeleteMy heart-felt thanks...xoxoxo