Inspired by the brilliant BBC TV drama.
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Oh sword, sword, how sharp!
Spiteful as a foreign mercenary - and as heartless.
Looking - though trying hard not to. Who from?
It is the gut-wrencher, an implement of torture.
Who is this who would steal my life?
What am I reading? Such sickening words
that pierce the breast like a steely blade.
God! How shall I ever staunch the inner bleeding?
They're draining my entire being, destroying their victim.
Oh why did this happen to me?
Sense of sight becomes dire curse. The screen,
static too long in shock, turns blank.
But the after-image expands in shocked brain. It's malignancy
is his betrayal - and with such a BITCH!
Aah, but beware the woman scorned...
Incoming text.
Oh sword, sword, how sharp!
Spiteful as a foreign mercenary - and as heartless.
Looking - though trying hard not to. Who from?
It is the gut-wrencher, an implement of torture.
Who is this who would steal my life?
What am I reading? Such sickening words
that pierce the breast like a steely blade.
God! How shall I ever staunch the inner bleeding?
They're draining my entire being, destroying their victim.
Oh why did this happen to me?
Sense of sight becomes dire curse. The screen,
static too long in shock, turns blank.
But the after-image expands in shocked brain. It's malignancy
is his betrayal - and with such a BITCH!
Aah, but beware the woman scorned...
Although on the outside here, your expressed drama has pulled me in. will definitely be looking to see where I can get access to this show.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Anthony!
DeleteIt is one of those rare TV dramas that literally had me "on the edge of my seat" from beginning to end. It was emotionally draining...yet totally addictive.
I do hope you get to see it someday...:)
Wow! I think this poem sounds like a classic!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Ana.
DeleteI really appreciate that.:))
Ygraine, this sounds very interesting, especially seeing I like some of the darker things in life; after all . . . I am a Witch.
ReplyDeleteOh this was definitely a dark drama, Lon...and if you ever get the opportunity to watch it, I can highly recommend! :)
DeleteYgraine really when I read yours poems always amazing me :)
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Oh Gloria...that is SO kind!
DeleteThank you so much...:))
All my Love, dear Friend xoxoxo
Wow, talk about an attention grabber. You have such an interesting and intriguing way of delving into any topic.
ReplyDeleteWell done friend!
💟Hope your studies are going well. Hugs!!💟
Dearest Geraldine...I so appreciate that...thank you!
DeleteYes, thank you, my studies are going fairly well...very hard work though!!
Hopefully, I'll get there in the end...
Big Hugs xoxoxo
Your wonderful poetry has amazing ability to deal with all kinds of topics so acquaintance .
ReplyDeleteDrama sounds really appealing as topic touches very human aspects
Oh Baili...it was so powerful a drama. It was difficult to watch at times, but maybe that is because it had a lot to say about the state of contemporary western society - it kind of made you ask yourself, "is this REALLY what we have become?"
DeleteThank you, my dear Friend...I so appreciate your take on things...and your kind encouragement.:))
A Hug.
This is brilliant! WOW!!! Well done my friend!
ReplyDeleteBig Hugs! I hope everything is well!
Oh Sweetie...THANK YOU...so, so much!!
DeleteAnd I just have to say again...your gorgeous artwork is out of this world!
Keep it coming, girl!!!
Lots of Love xoxoxo