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Friday 24 April 2020

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For Paul Gedzyk...

There is this memory of two wheels
churning up a spray of mud
high into the Boxing Day air.
Then the blue blur of your helmet

as you enter then leave my vision
in an instant, grappling with thin air
while your bike performs elaborate somersaults
in the opposite direction.

My heart is pounding with dread
as I approach the scene, my head
full of images of your broken bloodied body.
But you are fine...this time,

just resemble some grotesque mud monster
rising up out of the ground, as the crowd
rush to your aid. Trembling, I head to the pub
for a double brandy...

32 comments:

  1. I read some of your poems and I'm sure that you are a great poet.
    So I'm following you.
    Have a nice weekend.
    Kisses.

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    1. Oh WOW...thank you...so much!😊😊
      I am really happy you enjoyed...

      I have checked out your blog...brilliant work...and am following you now. 👍👍

      Have a great day...and stay safe!

      Kisses xxx

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  2. Yikes - Well Written But WoW - Stay Strong

    Cheers

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    1. Many thanks...I really appreciate that!😊😊

      Have a super day...and stay safe.

      Cheers 👍👍

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  3. Excellent my dearest and beautiful friend!
    Filled with emotional overtones and the fear of watching a loved one in mortal danger!
    You always choose descriptive words with just the right amount of feeling!

    Much Love and Big Hugs ❤💗❤💗❤💗

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    1. Oh WOW...that is so kind, dearest Jan...and I appreciate it so much!😊😊
      Paul is an ex colleague of my hubby's...whom we used to support at the bike trials. Unfortunately, he did later sustain serious injuries in a road accident, when he hit a tree on his bike and had to undergo surgery to rebuild several bones.🙁
      He is fine now though, and is back in the saddle!😊

      Have a fabulous day, my lovely friend!

      All my love and hugs ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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  4. BEAUTIFULLY written and captured. And yes, our hearts do more acrobatics than those we watch some days.
    Oceans of caring flowing your way.

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    1. Oh thank you, Sue...I so appreciate that!😊😊

      Please stay safe and well, my dear friend...

      Sending you much love and hugs ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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  5. Ygraine, my heart goes out to you, my good friend!

    A couple shots of brandy sure sounds good to wash away some of the anguish I've been feeling lately, but I can no longer drink any type of alcohol, due to the fact that I almost died from alcohol poisoning from having too much in my system. If it wasn't for my wife being there at that time, I wouldn't be here today.

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    1. Yes, I know how close you came to losing your life my friend...and I could weep for all the suffering you've been through in your life.😢
      Stay strong and safe, my good friend...sending you lots of positivity...😊👍😊👍

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  6. … and I'm sure that double brandy helped.

    Another powerful and very descriptive poem, thank you.

    I hope you have a good weekend. The weather looks set fair again, so a local walk will be included in our plans … oh, to go further afield but not yet.

    All the best Jan

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    1. It surely did, Jan!! 😉
      And thank you so much for your kind comment, I really appreciate it!😊😊

      Yes, indeed...such longing to journey further afield! Oh how I wish! Lol
      What has happened to our sun today??

      Hugs xxx

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  7. Un sereno fine settimana a te.

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    1. You are so kind, Giancarlo...and thank you so much!😊😊

      Have a great day...and stay safe...

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  8. Your poetry is great, Ygraine.
    I read until I convinced myself that you are doing well now.

    Happy activities and always blessed.

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    1. Oh thank you so much, Himawan...I am so happy you enjoyed the poem!😊😊

      Have a fabulous day...and stay safe.

      Blessings from England.

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  9. Ygraine,
    The blue blur on your helmet is also the color of your eyes, which makes my vision and my heart beat not with fear, but with the toast of our double brandy and all my kisses, which are always on your mouth ... Bilingual!
    Very good your poem!
    Many kisses and good weekend!!!

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    1. Oh thank you, my friend...so very much!
      I truly appreciate that...and I am so happy you enjoyed.😊😊

      Have a super day...and please stay safe!

      Many kisses xxx

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  10. Full of fear, but beautiful! Your poems ate full of emotions, love it. Stay safe everyone ☺

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    1. I am so happy you enjoyed, Natalia...and my heartfelt thanks!😊😊

      Have a wonderful day...and stay safe!

      Hugs xxx

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  11. Very emotional poem, glad it had a happy ending!

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    1. Me too, Mica!😉
      And thank you so much! 😊😊

      Hugs xxx

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  13. Thank you so much, Yannis...it was one of those poems that seemed to just write itself...a product, I guess, of old memories resurfacing...and I have experienced a bread deal if those recently...😉

    Have a super day...and stay safe, my friend.

    Hugs xxx

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  14. this is exquisite poem dear Ygraine
    i am always amazed by your description of any situation ,you recreate the drama before eyes with your way of story telling :)

    reminded me scenes from car racing sports ,this was always astonishing but reliving to see that driver would come out walking finely from dreadful accident
    i really enjoyed it my talented friend :)
    stay blessed and healthy! hugs and lots and lots of love!!!!

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    1. Oh thank you so much, dearest Baili!!
      I am so happy you enjoyed😊😊

      Always in my thoughts...sending you all my love and hugs...and my prayers that you and your precious family will stay safe and happy ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤🙏🙏🙏

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  15. A very emotional write! You always capture everything so perfectly Ygraine! Big Hugs and Stay safe!

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    1. Oh thank you, Sweetie...so very much!😊😊

      Stay safe too, my lovely friend!!

      All my love and hugs ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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  16. i like this and glad it ended well - and heck yes to that brandy, a double, mind you.

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