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Friday 13 November 2020

WINTER BLUES

The trees are stripped bare now
like naked bones picked clean
by the sharp beak of ravenous crow
in winter grown too lean.

Hill and dale are brown and dead
and birds no longer sing.
Of the coming months I'm full of dread,
winter's really not my thing.

North winds shapeshift leaves into devils,
while high above dark clouds
are banking up in rippling levels
as if sombre burial shrouds.

Each blade of grass is turning white
and solid as miniature swords.
Jack Frost's spell with stinging bite
brings a vision of frozen fiords.

What counter-magic can I devise
to banish him far away?
For he's the cause of summer's demise
and I'll make him pay some way.

Those days of bathing in the sun
on sandy beaches are gone,
and staying indoors is much less fun -
oh I feel so put upon!

But in my heart last summer's bees
still hum through the vibrant hues
of bluebells, poppies, roses and peonies...
to ward off these winter blues.

29 comments:

  1. ...and this is why we live in the south. Yes, if you've seen... partly barren, but still if you look closely, evergreen.

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    1. Indeed...it is so beautiful where you live! Oh you are so fortunate...and I am envious!😉

      Have a fabulous weekend!

      Hugs xxx

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  2. But in my heart last summer's bees
    still hum through the vibrant hues
    of bluebells, poppies, roses and peonies...
    Such a beautiful memory of summer!

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  3. Despite the fact that I love our much milder winters I do love your poem.
    And hope (so much) that your warm memories sustain you until Spring peeks over the horizon again.

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    1. I'm sure they will, Sue!😉
      And thank you, my dear friend...so happy you enjoyed.😊😊

      Lots of love and hugs ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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  4. My sweet Ygraine,
    We are naked in our essence. Birds do not migrate or sing anymore, because they are also full of dread. The world has become an endless winter. I also miss the days of sunbathing on the fine sandy beaches, where health was vibrant.
    Beautiful words, coming from you, dear friend of beautiful screens and letters.
    Many kisses and be well!🌹_(ヅ)/¯¯

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    1. Dear Doug... here's hoping for a happier summer 2021!!
      And my most heartfelt thanks...your kind words mean so much!😊😊

      Stay well too...and many Kisses xxx

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  5. Wonderful writing as usual. Although love winter partly because of the blues. Hope you are doing well.

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    1. Thank you so much, Anthony... I'm really happy you enjoyed!😊😊
      Yes, thanks... I'm just about coping with this new lockdown!😉 Do hope things are good with you...

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  6. so poetic, visually expressed to me because i see it.

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    1. Many thanks, Sandy...your kind words truly mean so much!😊😊

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  7. I don't mind Winter, but I'm dreaming of white Christmas, just like when I was a kid. There is so little snow for few years in a row now. Beautiful poem as always!

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    1. Same here, Natalia. I would really love a white Christmas! We haven't had any snow here for quite a few years either. And I miss it!!
      Thank you so much!😊😊

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  8. very impressive writing

    Even though I can't read poetry, but I like it

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    1. Oh thank you so much...I really appreciate that!!😊😊

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  9. Oh WOW!!! I could never express my thoughts as you do...in fact, I honestly don't believe anyone else could. Your talent with words is incredible...and I am in such awe...😊😊
    Thank you...so, so much!!!

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  10. Oh, beautiful summer ..., where we can sunbathe, play with the waves.
    Now it is winter [If in my country the rainy season] we can only do more activities in the house.

    Your lovely Poetry really really describes the current climate situation, my dear friend Ygraine.

    A hug of friendship i send from Indonesia.

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    1. let me hug you brother.. :D

      rainy season is good time for sleep

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    2. I think I'd much rather have your rainy season than our bitterly cold one!! ;D
      Oh thank you so so much for your wonderful comment...I truly appreciate it.

      Sending hugs back from England to my good friend!

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  11. 'Jack Frost's spell with stinging bite
    brings a vision of frozen fiords.'

    Brilliant

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    1. Oh I'm really happy you enjoyed...and many, many thanks!!

      Have a great day!:))

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  12. Oh this is Powerful painting of your poignant words and all i can see is still magic of barren winter ,stepping down in my bones
    wow you are exceptional poet with mighty imagination my friend

    i loved winters and i still do despite of all protest of my body lol
    i am glad you are focusing on spring times no matter where ever they are flourishing the earth ,you can't see them with physical sight but you have your window opened window of soul which is gift for believers and those who never loos e hope :)))
    hugs and blessings to you my dear friend!

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    1. Dearest Baili...oh you really are so kind, and how precious your wonderful friendship and encouragement is!
      Oh thank you...so so much.:))
      Hopefully we will manage to remain positive in these difficult times, and our faith will carry us through!

      Stay safe and well, my amazing friend...

      Much love and hugs <3 <3 <3

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  13. Fabulous words ... and looking at the weather forecast for later this evening the temperature is going to be 2 or 3 Celsius.
    Brrr

    All the best Jan

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    1. Thank you so much, Jan!👍
      Yes, looks like winter is set to arrive, doesn't it?🙄 Lol

      Have a good day.

      Hugs xxx

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