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Friday 27 November 2020

PHOTONS

We are the invisible, the ones you feel
rather than see; no shimmering forms
in the darkness, just pure energy
spiralling around itself within consciousness:
the source of white noise interferences

that send shivers down the spine
and cause such excitement
among paranormal investigators and the curious;
intriguing, destabilising scientific theorem
and established religious dogma.

Until we can prove our existence to you
beyond all shadow of doubt, that we
have survived the transition that you call "death",
we will remain in the shadows - silent
and just beyond your comprehension.

35 comments:

  1. Wooww! Very2 Good...πŸ‘πŸ‘

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    1. Thank you so much!! Really happy you enjoyed 😊😊

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  2. Shimmering, pulsating image...dying embers of the soul.
    Delicate energy in silence.

    My how you transport us to phantoms/photons with your beautifully written magical use of words, my beautiful and talented Soul Sister!!!

    Much Love and Big Hugs Always ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤πŸ‘»

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    1. Dearest Jan...you are always so very kind...oh thank you so much!😊😊
      It means so much to me to know that you enjoyed my poem.

      Take care and stay safe, beautiful Soul Sister...now and always 🌹🌹🌹

      Sending all my love and hugs ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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  3. And so I enjoyed this very much. An explanation for the “We” the survivors of the transition, just out of sight. A search to be continued. The hope of the beyond….

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    1. Oh I am so happy you enjoyed, Anthony...and many thanks!😊😊
      Yes indeed...a search that will probably never end...πŸ˜‰

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  4. A friend of mine developed an interesting theory, not of photons but about electrons.
    According to him, in all the matter of the universe that we know the electrons rotate in orbits with a fixed and equal distance. And there are never any electrons between these orbits. So, any matter whose electrons have different orbits, would be a kind of invisible and parallel world to ours.
    Your poem is brilliant, I liked it a lot.
    Good weekend. Stay safe.
    Kisses XXX

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    1. Sounds like I should meet up with your friend for a discussion on "the unseen"...could prove very interesting!πŸ˜‰
      Oh I am so glad you liked the poem, Jaime...and thank you so much!😊😊

      Hope you're having a great weekend too, my friend...and stay safe!

      Kisses xxx

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    1. Aww, thank you, Sue...so so much! I truly appreciate that.😊😊

      Lots of love and hugs ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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  6. I liked this, a lot :)

    Happy Friday Wishes, and enjoy your weekend too.
    I know it's not quite December but we are going to get some of our Christmas decorations out.

    All the best Jan

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    1. So glad you enjoyed, Jan...and many thanks!😊😊

      I hope you are having a good weekend too...and you have inspired me. I will go to the attic and bring my decorations down this afternoon too! πŸ˜‰

      Hugs xxx

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  7. You are a skilled writer! The texts are descriptive, profound and beautiful!
    Hugs xxx

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    1. Oh WOW...thank you so much...I really appreciate that!😊😊

      Hugs xxx

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  8. My sweet Ygraine,
    We are inevitably invisible, there is no sparkling shape in the darkness, only our energy coming out of our consciousness. Chills in the spine are caused by fear mixed with excitement, the curious do not understand us, the theorems and religious dogmas do not explain. Until we can prove that our existence happened, we are shadows, we will survive the transition that others call "death". Today we will remain silent where everything is beyond comprehension.
    Nice text.
    Many kisses. Take care. You live in my heart. πŸ’•

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    1. My dear friend Doug...you are so kind...my heartfelt thanks!😊😊

      Have a fabulous day...and stay safe for me.

      Many Kisses xxx

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  9. Poweful Ygraine, always amazing, send you love and hugs!

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    1. Oh thank you, dearest Gloria...so so much!😊😊

      Sending you much love and hugs back ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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  10. we are the invisible, and then to be silent, it's dead. so, actually we already dead lol

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    1. Great philosophy here...many thanks!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Š Lol

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    2. About philosophy of dead, i have heard someone talk about it. He said life in this world actually is death and after death is real life.

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  11. This poem seems like a secret passage in the monograph of an unequal but desired happiness.
    I have to read the poem under the unlimited light sunlight that goes all around my desk.
    Far away through the sunlight there is your name writen by the warm breath of Poetry.

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    1. Oh WOW, thank you so much!😊😊

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  12. Another beautiful writing from your work, friend YGraine.
    You are a talented writer πŸ‘.

    Have a super week.
    Greetings πŸ€—πŸ™

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    1. Thank you so much, my friend...and I'm really happy you enjoyed this.😊😊

      Wishing you a magical week also...and stay safe!

      Greetings πŸ™πŸ™

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    2. Keep writing,

      great day too, and stay safe :)

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    3. Thank you, dear friend YGraine.

      Thank you also for the encouraging words of Mr. Sudibjo.

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  13. Wooow, I love the hope in these last lines! Sooo well written again! One of your best poems I think, if not the best☺

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    1. Oh WOW!! You are so kind...my most heartfelt thanks!😊😊
      Have a lovely day and stay safe, my friend!

      Hugs xxx

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  14. Deliciei-me com os teus
    versos, poeta.
    VOU SEGUIR O TEU BLOG.
    Siga o meu se achar que
    deve.
    Beijos e parabΓ©ns.

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    1. Hi, thank you so much for your visit and your fabulous comment! I really appreciate it! 😊😊
      I am following you now...

      Have a good weekend!

      Kisses back xxx

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  15. in the darkness, just pure energy - Brilliant

    Happy December,
    Cheers

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    1. Aww, thank you so much!!😊😊

      Wishing you a magical...and healthy!...December too!

      Cheers πŸ‘πŸ‘

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  16. I liked very much read again your fantastic poem.
    Have a great day, my dear friend Ygrain.
    Kisses.

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    1. So wonderful to "see" you again, dear friend Jaime...always such a pleasure!😊😊

      Have a super weekend...and stay safe, my dear friend!

      Kisses xxx

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