He adored her
but their bond was fraying.
They flitted between being lovers and strangers.
He'd bought a vintage Cadillac.
He sang in the garage.
She shouted at him
and a spider dropped from the rafters
as if he, himself, was fair game.
He incensed her. It snowed.
The Cadillac got polished. It shined.
She threw her hairbrush against the wall.
He sat in his car, in pure ecstasy.
"I'll enter her in the Concours d'Elegance" he said,
"I'll clean her engine parts!" They gleamed
from all the loving care and attention.
The engine purred like a contented cat. He was in his element.
She wanted a night out.
He was checking the oil.
They attended a friend's wedding.
As he threw confetti, his eyes never left
his beloved car out there in the street.
The Cadillac won 1st prize in the Concours.
Winter mornings cast long shadows
across all except the garage.
She stayed in bed. She was fed up.
He was fine-tuning and tweaking the points and electrics.
She threw his breakfast in the bin.
And when her home made cakes flopped
and when she failed an important exam
and when their son moved out
he was lying under the car
and tinkering with the exhaust system.
The car looked brand new
and the aroma of oil and polish permeated his clothing.
He stumbled upon her this morning, sobbing in the garage.
She thought she'd lost her keys in there -
at least, that's what she claimed...
but their bond was fraying.
They flitted between being lovers and strangers.
He'd bought a vintage Cadillac.
He sang in the garage.
She shouted at him
and a spider dropped from the rafters
as if he, himself, was fair game.
He incensed her. It snowed.
The Cadillac got polished. It shined.
She threw her hairbrush against the wall.
He sat in his car, in pure ecstasy.
"I'll enter her in the Concours d'Elegance" he said,
"I'll clean her engine parts!" They gleamed
from all the loving care and attention.
The engine purred like a contented cat. He was in his element.
She wanted a night out.
He was checking the oil.
They attended a friend's wedding.
As he threw confetti, his eyes never left
his beloved car out there in the street.
The Cadillac won 1st prize in the Concours.
Winter mornings cast long shadows
across all except the garage.
She stayed in bed. She was fed up.
He was fine-tuning and tweaking the points and electrics.
She threw his breakfast in the bin.
And when her home made cakes flopped
and when she failed an important exam
and when their son moved out
he was lying under the car
and tinkering with the exhaust system.
The car looked brand new
and the aroma of oil and polish permeated his clothing.
He stumbled upon her this morning, sobbing in the garage.
She thought she'd lost her keys in there -
at least, that's what she claimed...
HaHa! Goodness! This brought back some memories! :).
ReplyDeleteCadillac..Wow! When l came back to this country in
1973, after just getting married, couple years before
my daughter was born, we used to go to a local restaurant,
most Friday night, and became good friends with owners,
Herbie and Sue..when we'd eaten, socialised, helped behind
the bar, they'd let us stay over, save driving home..!
Well..over the fireplace, was some 8ft long~horns..I loved
them..cut a long story short, after a couple years they
decided to move to the Isle of Wight..Before leaving, Herbie
gave me the long~horns..HeHe! When l got home, my wife asked
me, what l intended to do with them, well..well..well..I said,
l was gonna buy a 'pink' Cadillac..and mount the horns on the
bonnet..well..well..well..the reply came, l'm afraid unprintable! Something like..NO! YOU CAN'T..!!! :(.
My marriage lasted just 6yrs, l gained custody of my daughter
in 1980..raised her on my own for the next 14yrs...AND! AND!
Where are the long~horns now, l hear you all ask..???
Over my fireplace in the front room..where else..in fact, if
you wanna buy a pair just now..on line..you'll pay around
£1,500..AND! NO! I never did get a Cadillac..Had a Roller,
E~Type, Datsy Sedan, Mercs..But not a Cadillac..shame as l love
American cars..!
I passed my test 3 weeks after my 17th birthday, went straight out and bought Ford Zephyr 4 MK3..The passion wagon..Less said the better..! HeHe! Love motor cars...Bruuuuum! :O).
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Ah, another car enthusiast?! ππ
DeleteI'm married to one of those...only I'm fortunate, he doesn't always put the car first!!
Many thanks, Willie...ππ
Haha, my husband also loves cars, but I am so lucky, cos he always puts my and our son firstπ Very well written, you are so good with words and you can always create different moods☺
DeleteAww, thank you, Natalia...and it's great to find another "fellow sufferer" lol
DeleteHave a super day ❤❤❤
Enjoyed. wonderfully explained, the two points of view. Had me thinking a bit about my own obsessions and relationships. Of course I find it much easier to understand the enthusiast’s world☺
ReplyDeleteHa, me too, Anthony...relationships are far more complicated! π
ReplyDeleteMany thanks.ππ
Have a super weekend!
How wonderfully romantic and funny and sad.
ReplyDeleteHe loved the car. She loved him...and the car became the other woman.
Brings back memories of some of my boyfriends from my teen years :)
Loved this my dearest friend...you are amazing!!!
Lots of Love and Hugs ❤❤❤❤❤❤
Dearest Jan...oh how sweet you are..and how I appreciate your kind words!
DeleteFunny you should mention some of your teenage boyfriends...exactly the same here!! Lol
I hope you are having a fabulous weekend!
Sending you much love and hugs ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
This is so clever, and so sad. How I wish that all of us (yes me too) put the same care into our relationships as we do our passions...
ReplyDeleteAww, thank you my dear Friend...so much!
DeleteYes, me too...I often neglect my other half when I'm writing or studying.
Must make an effort to remedy that...thank you for reminding me!ππ
Much love and hugs, always ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
This is amazing.
ReplyDeleteI always enjoy your poems, you have a wonderful way with words.
All the best Jan
Oh thank you so much, Jan...so happy you enjoyed!ππ
DeleteBig Hugs ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
well you captured her mood really well. And he with his car - wonder if it keeps him warm at night..lol. Love the story ...with your writing I can always "see"it as if I'm there.
ReplyDeleteKnowing him...yes, probably!! Lol
DeleteOh thank you, Sandy...so much. I really appreciate that ππ
Big Hugs ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
this is powerful ,intriguing and really sensitive dear Ygraine !
ReplyDeletei think we all can relate so well as women
you treated the topic with sheer intensity and so delicately my wonderful talented friend !
talking about most weird and complicated relationship is not easy relationship which is most special and beautiful at the same time !
i am inspired and touched :)
lots of love hugs and blessings to you my dear friend !
Oh you are so kind, dearest Baili...thank you so, so much!ππ
ReplyDeleteI really hope you are having a fabulous weekend!!
Sending you much love and hugs ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Oh thank you so much...I truly appreciate your wonderful comment!ππ
ReplyDeleteHave a super day!
Ygraine, I really enjoyed reading that story, you're such a great writer!
ReplyDeleteAww...thank you so much, Lon!ππ
DeleteSo good to have you back...you have been really missed
, my Friend!!π
Thank you, Ygraine, my good friend, I truly missed you as well!
DeleteOh dear Ygraine what fun and special story. My dad loved his cars all !! And he had a cadillac and others. And for me and my mom these cars were never important. But for him was different I dont know why. Is a mistery.
ReplyDeleteSend you hugs and love .
Xoxo
I guess it must be a "man thing" haha.
DeleteThank you so much, dear Gloria...and I hope all is good with you!
Much love and hugs ❤❤❤
Thank you!π
ReplyDeleteYes, I will come and visit your blog shortly...
❤️
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rue!ππ
DeleteHugs xxx
I was imagining this beautiful winter tale. Love the way you describe the whole scenario
ReplyDeleteHave a nice day
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Aww...thank you...so much!ππ
DeleteHugs xxx
Ygraine,
ReplyDeleteEvery rope has both sides.
You spoke very well in your text.
Really enjoyed it!
Kisses!
Thank you so much...and really happy you enjoyed!ππ
DeleteKisses back!!
estupendo post ! Espero verte pronto por mi blog ! Feliz dΓa! π§‘π§‘π§‘
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!ππ
ReplyDeleteAnd I really love your blog xxx
What a brilliant write! You are amazing Ygraine! Big Hugs!
ReplyDeleteUn bel post.
ReplyDeleteBuon fine settimana.