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Friday, 5 July 2019

THE CANNON



Standing by the old army cannon,
linear time visually shifting.
I'm drawn here again to touch the past,
my hands resting on metal:
an organic sensor. Through it
I'm back there in the thick of battle,
dodging the explosions all around me.
Been here so many times I'm part of it all -
will probably physically cross the barrier one day
and be generations back, on the Continent...

I'm in military uniform, firing at the enemy.
The noise is deafening, the fear overwhelming...

No one notices me standing here -
I'm already fading into the history books.
Only a lone gull is curious and approaches
the strange time-traveler only partly here.
The ether shifts around me, above me,
but I am utterly still. Observing the wraiths, listening
to the muffled shouts, until I feel dizzy.
Then I shake my head and push them back.
And I am, once again, alone.

21 comments:

  1. My dearest precious Ygraine this is MAGNIFICENT piece of poetry !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    you lived up the life of that cannon and what a touching and gloomy ending yet so brilliant so beautiful and intriguing!

    i am in awe how powerful and fertile your imagination is my wonderful friend!

    believe it or not my God knows that my heart never forgets you nor you ever expelled from my heartfelt prayers !

    your previous comment brought tears in my eyes !

    i wish i can take your pain and give you all my health (whatever is left)

    i am sure my kind lord will bless you with health and happiness each step ahead !
    HUGS!

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    1. Dearest Baili...how can I ever thank you enough...such kind words have made me feel truly cared for.
      I am indeed so, so, blessed to have a friend like you.
      A precious dream of mine is that, by some miracle, we can meet someday and share a coffee together. Oh how wonderful that would be!😊😊

      You are always in my thoughts and prayers...

      With all my love and hugs ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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  2. What a wonderful poem, observation and imagination, all in one. And being there… Those forgotten souls especially in the mist of the horror yet still alone.. So good..

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    1. Oh wow...thank you, Anthony...with my deepest appreciation!😊😊

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    1. Oh I am so happy you enjoyed...and thank you so, so, much!😊😊

      All my love and hugs ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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  4. You are amazingly talented in your writings.
    Your perspectives are excellent.
    I love this photo of you and may I say you are gorgeous outside as well as inside.

    Lots of Hugs and Love ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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    1. Dearest Jan...oh how kind!!
      I have never thought of myself as "gorgeous"...rather the opposite, in fact...so your beautiful comment really means so much!😊😊
      And I am so happy you enjoyed...

      Lots of love and hugs back ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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  5. I can only emphatically echo Baili's adjective: "Magnificent" Poetry.

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  6. My most heartfelt thanks, Geo...your kind words mean so much...😊😊

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  7. awesome article..
    thanks for sharing and have a nice day

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    1. Thank you, Azka.
      Wishing you a great day too...😊😊

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  8. Beautifully written my friend!

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    1. Thank you, my Friend!😊😊

      Do hope all is good with you...

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  9. Ygraine, you are one sexy woman!!! You are beautiful on the inside and outside! You are rocking that outfit girl!!! Your poem is amazingly written! You take us places through your words and it is powerful! Big Hugs and I hope you're doing well!

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    1. Oh Sweetie, you have made me blush!!😄 Lol
      I used to be so lacking in confidence, but then being diagnosed with the cancer made me think, "What the heck! I don't know how much time I have left, so I'll just wear what I like!" Haha
      I'm still just a plain Jane though!!😉
      But thank you for being so kind...I can't tell you how much your encouragement and support means to me!!!

      Have a wonderful and magical weekend!😊😊

      All my love and hugs ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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  10. What a wonderfully written poem, you have such a good way with words.

    Love the picture of you too.

    All the best Jan

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    1. Oh Jan...my most heartfelt thanks! You have really lifted my spirits today...and I am so happy you enjoyed...😊😊
      Have a fabulous weekend!

      Big Hugs xxx

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  11. that is one "cool" photo - love the outfit...and your shoes! Great pic of you and i loved the poem.

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    1. Oh that is so sweet of you, Sandy...thank you so much!😊😊
      And I so happy you enjoyed the poem!

      Big Hugs xxx

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  12. Awe...thank you, Rue...so much!😊😊

    Big Hugs xxx

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